My presentation 12

Hello every body

I want to do my presentation but I don't have that much of words to help me in my presentation and I am in grade 12A so my presentation should be stronge and special to got a full mark

I started my presentation with this words can any one who have a long experience in English correct it for me please and give me more words and ideas

This is my first words

Hello teacher , hello girls , I will present my presentation which is talk about the success classic and I hope that be interesting and useful for all of you actually I have chosen this topic because I think that me and you need to listen about this topics and advices in this level of our life because we are in a very important and sensitive year which will chose where will be our place in the future

First I want to ask you a question , can anyone tell me what is the meaning of the success with her .?

Really we need to successes as much as we need to breathe , and from the first moment of our bourn we have some thing from inside our body is calling us to wake up , work and achieve greater success .. Although we have a mental image that the success is the guest to make the maximum effort , in order to realize the prefect but in real the success is very simple than what we think and we can discribe it as a brave and ability to give the freedom for your dreams and hopes wich it inside us and give it a chance to move and have an interest with air

Please help me and correct it in near time :cry:


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